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Jul 27, 2006 | 1:16 PM EDT
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3.9 MB
4 min 13 sec
4.18 / 5.00

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Rated 4.18 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

i think it might need some more pop, but i need some feedback on it, please



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


It really does need "POP!" not just pop but POP!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


the slap bass and the kick were a bit poppy to me. and the volume should be more intune to everything else. it seems sporadic after a while


Rated 4 / 5 stars


im gonna reviw as i listen.

good start
not likeing the bass in the song
the bass is powering over the melody
i think you should change the melody instrument unless you can mix it with soumething else to make it have an intersting efect.
yeah bass is still powering over and sometimes i hear it powering over too much.
interesting call ind answer instruments between phantom and christine
i now hear background musics drowning out the melody at the change
suddenly i hear the melody too loud drowning everything
i love the instrument youre using to end this for christines voice
i love the fact that youre getting louder towards the end.
bass again is powering over too much.

well now i finished it.
its great.
not much of techno tho.
definitely not a techno.
i dont get the techno feel.

the big problems to the song are:
-bass most of the time is louder than the melody
-distribution of volume between the different instruments ex: non important instruments is too loud most of the time

i hope this helps out a bit.


STU-PIDASO responds:

yeah you are correct.
i realized i uploaded the wron version. (this was my test version.

i will take what said into account and modify my good one then post a second version with fixes.

thanks for some good constructive critisism.