Interesting how you decided to do four "movements" to this one. I'm not really sure what to make of all of it. You seem to have four unique ideas. I definitely think you managed to hit the mood of the image in at least one or two of them!
Out of all four, I really think the third section (1:25) was most fitting, although the other three are also quite close. If you had developed a whole song out of this fragment, it would have been great.
More attention to mastering would have been great. Once again, there's a continuity thing going on between the sound and quality of the vocals and the guitar. Vocals sound great, but guitar is really dirty and fuzzy sounding. Maybe some EQ and stereo imagery work would clean up the guitar. Alternately, adding some more instruments like keys would have been cool. I would love to hear a piano version of this.
Keep compos(ed/ing)!
-Samulis
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My ratings:
Originality- 7/10
Relevance- 20/30
Composition- 15/25
Instrumentation- 10/15
Mastering- 6/10
Emotion/Interest- 6/10
Total: 64/100 (NG: 3 stars)