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Dad, please put a shirt on

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Dad, please put any shirt on.

I worked very hard to make this, give me critiques both good and bad, i can use the help. Yes it is instrumental.

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well it is good and some of the notes are in key it's just it could use a better rhythm to it as some of the notes have a note 0.5 seconds after one was already hit, so it kinda throws the melody off a bit
other then that it was pretty good

I really liked the melody part of the song. It fit well with the video it was a part of.

I'm no piano player but perhaps the tempo could have been faster maybe, I think it would work better maybe. Also could have done with it being longer, it was nice to listen to you see :)

The melody was good but the Rhythm was bad.

Not too bad, however the piano at the intro sounds a bit sloppy with two notes overlapping close together. Makes it sound sloppy. Separate them by one tiny note box in FL Studio and you should be fine. Other than that, sounds like a good start to a song.

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Belthagor
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Score
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Uploaded
Mar 7, 2014
9:16 PM EST
Genre
Classical
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44 sec

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