I'd say you need longer loops

What you really need is a melody, not 1 sec loops repeating over and over again. That is all

aww man....

again again and again...its repetivness...and remember try and try to give moroe energy to it than just simple beats....im sorry i offended oyu in anyway through all my review but its the truth :(

not the best. but not the worst.

you at least have some talent.therfore i salute you

sounds like VG music...

gets very repetative...nice, and soothing...try changing it up a little...maybe even add a base to it to make it more ambient...otherwise, it's a great song :)

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