Something I felt like doing.
It's not much, I just organized it a bit more and made it less ear shattering.
Nice
So this was a nice tune here it for sure is some industrial sound here but you gave it some good quality I do like how this one ended and while this review is also ending here you have some nice work here so keep it real and do what you do best keep creating some vibe like you have done here today
~X~
For once I have to disagree with Grinder. The percussion (read, snares) take(s) away from the rest of the mix. It's so sharp and omnipresent that everything else is a background texture, at best, for most of the piece.
The review below me (in my opinion) is wrong. But if this were designed to be a melodic piece of music, they would be right on point.
Anyway...
I love the atmosphere. Very brooding. And the percussion gives it just enough energy to cary on without being too much for its minimal nature.
Go you!
Told you I'd flesh it out.
I like the ominous mood and effects. You have a good sense of rhythm and all. However, I think it progressed very slowly and needed something more melodic to tie it together a bit. You have to have some notes in there, man; it can't just all be effects. Also, the glitchy effect at the end seemed a bit irrelevant. I think you should have looped it. Overall, though, I liked it. It'd be good for a creepy drama/suspense movie or something. ;)
Well, like Grinder said, it wasn't designed to be melodic. It was designed to sound like how I felt at the time.
But thank you for the review, it means alot :)
Very cool! >:D!
It sounds like it could be an intro for something huge!! Love the improvement!
Thanks man.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Corode 
