For once I have to disagree with Grinder. The percussion (read, snares) take(s) away from the rest of the mix. It's so sharp and omnipresent that everything else is a background texture, at best, for most of the piece.
The review below me (in my opinion) is wrong. But if this were designed to be a melodic piece of music, they would be right on point.
I love the atmosphere. Very brooding. And the percussion gives it just enough energy to cary on without being too much for its minimal nature.
Told you I'd flesh it out.
I like the ominous mood and effects. You have a good sense of rhythm and all. However, I think it progressed very slowly and needed something more melodic to tie it together a bit. You have to have some notes in there, man; it can't just all be effects. Also, the glitchy effect at the end seemed a bit irrelevant. I think you should have looped it. Overall, though, I liked it. It'd be good for a creepy drama/suspense movie or something. ;)
Well, like Grinder said, it wasn't designed to be melodic. It was designed to sound like how I felt at the time.
But thank you for the review, it means alot :)
Very cool! >:D!
It sounds like it could be an intro for something huge!! Love the improvement!
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