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I've been studying like hell pretty much everything related to music and composition since I uploaded my first song. I still have lots more to learn, but I hope the work I've done shows in the quality of this piece compared to my first song.


It's a very good Piece in my opinion. :D
You should make a remake, if you get a better piano soundfont. Maybe you could use the reeverb on all Instrument sections at the same time, like I do with FL Studio. It deepens the audio experience.
I hope you Keep making Music, because I believe that you can create a stunning piece!

I would've probably mixed the piano in the intro differently, but it was fine otherwise.
The strings are really cool! In this piece, you had a better slowdown than in your previous one, I'd say (the one at 0:47 =>). Also, this time, it led into a kind of climax, and a pretty good one at that. I still feel there might've been something missing, maybe in the higher registers.
1:48 => is A really cool instrument too. I wonder if it had sounded better without the piano, and with another instrument instead? The way you began using the piano in the section at the end was really good though, and it filled the higher register a bit too!

Great work!

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Thonz responds:

There certainly is something missing after 0:47. Perhaps something in the higher registers but there is no bass at all, which definitely makes it sound thin.
At 1:48, I played around with some different instruments but none seemed to do the job so I ended up using the piano with the staccato strings.

I'm glad you liked the piece and thanks for taking the time to review!

Chilling work. I'm looking forward for more of your work sir. :)

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Thonz responds:

Hearing such words certainly motivates to make more, so thanks!

This is a nice song. I found the piano maybe just a tad too hollow. Also it felt like you could have introduced your higher register instruments a bit earlier in to the song. It feels like I have to drag myself along to the climax.

Still a great piece though, when the climax does arrive, it is well done and nicely composed. Keep it up!

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Thonz responds:

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback! :) And thank you for the scout as well.

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4.88 / 5.00

Mar 3, 2014
3:14 PM EST
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6.5 MB
2 min 52 sec

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