Hiya, I think this is a basically decent piece, with a clear tone, but it could do with a bit of jazzing up. Excite us with some variation in your percussion, for example. I think one of the issues with the track is it has a bit of a flat atmosphere, it needs some zest, something that elevates it, something that hooks you onto it, something that makes it more intense. Maybe some different harmonic lines, or a change in tempo, a soft passage. Good luck with your future work.
Hey, thanks for the tips, I will remember!