Meh

The distortion was ok, but overall the song was lame. It's boring and so looooooong. I could hardly finish it. The sounds are to random and out of place for me. Try to practice your placement of sounds a little better.

Interesting

I like the guitar, but when you say you used distortion, you're not kidding. In fact you use too much. Whoa. What the hell was that little clown music thing in the middle. Weiird, and kind of creepy when it switches back to the original loop.

I like this, but I think most people will find it too experimental for their tastes. It really is going out on a limb as strictly industrial. It is very experimental in its nature, but I think that adds a lot to it.

Good job mate. A little abstract, but it works!