This would make for a decent title screen to a space game, just as you said. It's somewhat generic and a bit boring, but it serves its purpose.
I like the alternating bass effect you have going on here, sounds really nice through my headset. The lead is a bit drone-ish, but then again it is a loop. Like I said, the only problem I really have with it, is that it's a bit dull. I'll vote four stars for the submission but I'm rating three stars in the review because it's just a standard loop project.