As a generalization I enjoyed it. There are some good parts I like that shine through (such as at 01:07). However my biggest complaint is that the style of the melody varies very little. There are times I like when you do change it (such as 2:06), but it could be that the voice you use for the melody is something I don't enjoy listening to as much.
What I really like is the percussion. It's sharp, clean, and the kick is thumpy.
Keep up the good work.
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