I personally love the synth that starts at 0:45, my only tip would be to pump that kick drum and snare a bit, such as side chain. And master out your sounds a bit, they sound crowded. But great start :)
Thanks for the comment! Yeah I agree with you. I didn't take the proper amount of time to mix and master this, since it is only a sample. However once I finish this song, I definitely will be sure to make the kick and snare much more prominent, and take the time to mix and master(to the best of my abilities).
I really love that intro you have there. Sounds so good. Unfortunately I don't how it sounds about 45 seconds in. I'm no professional, and I sure as hell don't know how to make music but I'll call it that synth (since I don't know what else to call it) doesn't match the rest of the songs. It sounds almost off tone. I was just going to skip by this song, but I just really enjoyed the intro. Maybe change up that part a little bit and I think it can be something even better.
That's just my opinion though. Cheers!
Thanks dude! I really appreciate your feedback. And yeah, I do agree with you on the synth that starts at 45 seconds. I made it so that each note had two sounds playing at once(if that makes sense) and both sounds don't exactly mix. I sort of wanted that, but it doesn't really sound too good when it's on Newgrounds or Soundcloud. Once I eventually mix and master it, it should sound much better. Thanks again for commenting!