I agree with noncompos, a bit of scratching would make this pretty sick. Just a touch here and there, wouldn't want to overdo it of course.
I didn't have time for scratches, I might upload another version so..
Wow, man. This is just beautiful. I'll be using this soon, for sure. Keep up the awesomeness, dude. You rock!
I like it a lot. I think it only needs some variation in the bass line and some breaks in the guitar. Maybe try to get like a record scratch effect [not sure of the terminology] on the guitar and beats at some of the breaks [?]. And theres a hi-hat hit thats sorta off beat. I think it sounds fine if that was your intention, but it repeats a bit too much I think. I'm by no means a reputable reviewer, so this is just my humble opinion.
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