Hiya. I think the underlying structure of the piece is good but I think it could do with some unifying element in the there that hooks it altogether. It's a bit disparate. There's nothing that really tugs on any of my emotions. Hook me in! Make me uncomfortable or scared or sad or whatnot. For example, I think the transition about 20 seconds in from your lovely opening violin line to the dissonant french horns is a bit forced, and the those two phrases seem to have nothing to do with one another. I also think you overused block chords quite a bit and it stopped your track from really coming alive. Sprinkle in some more interesting musical lines.
I hope this criticism is taken in the spirit in which it's intended. Good luck with your future work!
Thanks for the review! Yeah, the two parts don't go together too well because I've had the first part done nearly three months ago and I didn't know where else to go with it nor did I want to make it too short. The block chords are a result of me not wanting two voices with the exact same melody or chord structure. Perhaps my previous orchestral piece, +Tears+, may tug at your emotions a bit more.
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