This was a bit random. The different parts didn't seem to go together very well, even though all of this was well composed. I very much liked the part starting from 0:40. It takes a lot of bravery to put in a portion with a seemingly varying tempo. The synths at 1:30 hit you like an alarm clock.
I can see much improvement from here. Keep on doing what you like.
thats pretty amazing for a first keep up the good work ...p.s it really caught my atention but then again i smoke alot of weed lol.