You did it again. That was awesome. Nice work.
Originality: Definitly original. Pretty good.
Diversity: It is diffrent. Especially the high pitched sounds.
Clarity: The only problem was the high pitched sounds which left ringing sounds which carryed in to the next "part"
Effort: I'm not sure if you put effort into this but I'm sure you did so I'll give you a pretty good score. Actually really good.
all i can say is lose the ...
take out the Do Doo sound. sounds so generic and out of place from the rest of the music. try a different instrument maybe or just try a different melody with it.