Very good song! I like it a lot. Do you mind if I use this song in my Geometry Dash level? :)
Man this is just amazing. Natural talent here!
Wow! You made this in your first mouth of music making? DAMN dude!
But like Back-From-Purgatory said, it's a bit repetitive, it could have help if added a more energetic section to the song. But that's really my only problem, and the songs I made in my first month had MUCH worse problems.
Keep it up!
This is pretty bad ass for your first month making music. Stuff I made in my first month was fucking awful in comparison to this.
Really the only complaints I have is it is a little repetitive, and the beat feels a little uninspired and doesn't really evolve past it's basic rhythm.
I really liked those piano hits and the quick synth runs that happened periodically throughout, they added quite a bit of atmosphere to the piece as a whole. It's amazing how much a little thing like that can add.
Keep it up, if this is what you're making in your first month, I can't wait to see what you come up with a year from now.
This is actually amazing for your first month of writing music. The biggest problem currently is there is way too much reverb spread through the mix, making the whole song muddy. Turn down the reverb and you should be solid. Also I don't like the piano, go download PIano One (it's free!).
The chord progression is really solid and edgy/dancy and I really like how you automate the sustain on the chords to open it up and then close it, makes the song feel like it's constantly evolving. Really nice chip arps in places that add a lot too. Overall really amazing for your first month, keep at it dude!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.