omg!!!

oh my god Man is this cool or what.. This will definitely go down in Ng history for best music!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'm sure of it

Well...

I guess you tried... This could have been a great piece, there was just too much emptiness... Your idea was good, but you need to make more sounds to fill in the holes. It's like painting the outline of a square but leaving the inside colorless. I must admit though, you did an exellent job for your first time using FL5 :) You have plenty potential, so just take your time and go over everything. Quality not quantity. think before you submit, "does this feel empty, or does the music sound odd?" If so, make some changes to the music. Your perfectly capable of making great songs, you just need to take the time to :)

Best regards,
<\**DJ_Hectic**/>

P.S. You can check out my stuff if you like :)
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1316216&sub=395
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It's a start

This is good for your first try at a new program, I'm just guessing it was FL Studios.

Again I found The background empty, the percusion was better but still absent through most of the piece. Try putting a background theme that fits with the percussion or viceversa to fill up your song.

Another issue I had was that it seemed like a couple themes sort of pasted together, not much relation between them.

On a good note I did like alot of the themes you put in this one, some were simple but they got the job done.

Keep at it.

needs more stuff..

it needs more backround melodies. Not just different instruments playing in different times. I guess you use Fl for this one right? i think so. You did much better here.

My new song is up, check it out.
~Dj_Cargo~