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Oak Hearts

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Just uploading some random stuff. Let me know what you think!

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Our hearts were never meant to feel injustice like this
And what did we do? Take a backseat and threw out our opportunity

Everything I say and do
Boils down to
The juxtaposition of feeling profound
Yet not worth being heard out

To sum up how I think?
'Antikythera machine'
Complex and rusted;
And also pretty deep

If there was a way, that I could defenestrate your brain
And the contents that make you act insane
(Believe me, I would)

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Really enjoyed this. Not typical pop-punk (which is a good thing). Looking forward to hearing more! If you're interested, I'd love to give a crack at vocals (although I don't think yours are bad at all) :)

Really enjoy this. Really cool production and mixing. The riffs are really powerful, and your voice cruises along nicely, but maybe doesn't quite have the power to match the music? I think too, the way it sits within the mix, and the tone in which its set, just sounds a touch mumbly, making harder to understand your lyrics. Perhaps that's because of how the vocals have been double tracked. I'm being over critical though. It's still really strong music, that stuff on the vocals is a minor complaint...

Chaz responds:

Thanks for the review, not overly critical in the slightest. I don't consider myself a singer at all, so anything that isn't blasting it as the most awful thing ever is a bonus :)

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Chaz
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Uploaded
Feb 4, 2014
11:51 AM EST
Genre
Punk
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3.2 MB
2 min 50 sec
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