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This is my first track... critique would be appreciated. Not sure about the genre.

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What did you make this with?

G9 responds:

Fruity Loops Producer Edition only, no VST's, nothing.

Thanks for the line!

the beat was real crisp

Watch your clarity. try to work on making everything tuned together. The tune itself is just great. The beat and base are really nifty and have mad clarity. Try to make stuff sound a bit clearer next time. Overall though great work Peace syntrus out (0_0)

G9 responds:

Thanks man... I went crazy, layering around like that. Some of the instruments just did not melodically mix... no matter what octave I put it at, it sounded offkey. Thanks for the tips!



lol this was pretty good man for your first.

my first one suked....

great job man keep on workin on it and you'll be better than cornandbeans. lol =P

I finally got what i wanted, to listen to sumthing of yours

you rok man!

G9 responds:

Thanks man! Everyone has a start, right?

"Keep on workin on it" and I could be better than anyone... thing is I don't have the time or probably the committment/motivation to work at it that hard. Sorry folks, that statement made me (and probably you) feel like a lofty ass. :P

You'll be getting more tracks... but I got to learn how to compose first. :)

Thanks for the review!

go boy go go go

hehe, yeh, not a a bad 1st attempt, i think most stuffs been covered in the other reviews. all i'm gonna say is keep em coming, practice makes good, i'm sure ur not short on ideas, just need to keep going

G9 responds:

Yeah... pretty much, all in all... it's just repetition. That's the primary problem with the track... well thanks for dropping a line!


Hello World...

wow, you our good, except that base line sounds off so the song seems a little confused. Anyway keep trying G9! Also thanks for putting me on the the podcast 4 times so far. Hope to listen to more work from you and more g9Core podcasts!


G9 responds:

Thanks man... and your songs kick ass, man, as all the other submissions do... hence they make the podcast! You'll definitely hear some more of my tracks in the near future... as well as more podcasts!


Credits & Info



3.89 / 5.00

Jul 22, 2006
4:26 PM EDT
General Rock
File Info
3.6 MB
3 min 53 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.