Another decent piece here from the portal and it really comes a live with some decent sounds sometimes it was hard to hear everything but it was still a good piece and good sound you have an idea here but more quality could be placed up or cleaned up to hear it better. You have a good track here
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The sound could be cleaned up a bit to be heard better
I loved the beginning, but then... that dubstep kicks in! Feels like the atmosphere is lost in the savored sawing of the track. I think chillstep might fit better overall with the vocal sample, and it does move in that direction at times but never fully as chill as I'd like it to.
The voice is a bit low sometimes, some words are easy to miss, like towards the end of the intro, but it phases in and out nicely. I like the shaky sound of that sample, but I just can't dig the vocal/audial combination too well. The closest to my liking that it gets is right at the start and at around the 3:30 phase. Keep at it!
Thanks for the review man! The reason the vox are low is because her lyrics suck and I decided to try to use her as more of an instrument.
I'm sorry this doesn't suit your tastes ;( this was the last song I made without monitors though so expect better sounding stuff in the future
Looks like my goal to make dubstep that anyone can enjoy is still out of my grasp, but I'll get your favor eventually ;)
I don't know what she's saying when there are all of the high-pitched "aahs" going from left to right. I really like the instrumental, though. The only part im iffy about is the beginning. The vocals and the other high/low octave "aahs", like I said, make it hard for me to understand her. kinda clash together and it gets a weeee bit confusing. It's not horrible though. This is actually pretty nice. At 3:02, though, I got a bit of chills, i'm being honest. That vocal lead in was great! This song, overall has its good and iffy parts...overall, though, it's pretty solid. Keep it up!
Thanks a lot man! I was going for using the vocals as more of an instrument than vocals, and I did make this right before I got studio monitors, so hopefully some of the mastering stuff stays with this song
and apparently my next song (WIP) is already giving chills so keep those eyes open haha