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Dolphin Microwave

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The name was just because I had no fuckin idea what to name it.
But its liquid-ish DnB and It took me awhile to make so yeah.
Tell me why it sucks so I can improve.

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Seriously, since when did you get so good?! Talk about taking down producer esteem :D
Amazing mix, great progressions, lovely effects. The sub might be a bit too present, since it's pretty booming and there's not much of quiet subless parts in the song at the second half , which would be a bit more of a moment of rest for the ears. Anywho, amazing work. Really reminds me of Awake, by the way.



Very nice. Excellent intro keys work. Check for some clipping resonant frequencies there though. Proper work


danyool777 responds:

Thanks man.
I'm still on my way to learning but thank you very much.


Pros:
Decent Intro
Liked the chill, ambient touch
Good melody
Nice choice of kicks and loops(unless made from scratch)
Like the buildup around 2:18 to the drop(Beautiful)
Drums were kickass

Cons:
Random sounds and fx don't really fit in with the intro and drown out the melody making it somewhat annoying.
01:37 bad synth choice and I would fix the lead(seems a little mediocre)

Overall:
Ok so I saw a lot of things in this song, both good and bad. They are all listed above. This song can be a hit if you would tweak a few things. Your transitioning was pretty well done and i thought the intro and outro were done well also. Your intro however besides the problems I listed above was a tad bit long, It seemed it took up the majority of the song. Your song gets a little repetitive towards the end up until the outro. I would try and mix it up in between. Other than tht this was a good track and I look forward to hear more from you. Check out our new track and let us know what you think. 3/5 5/5

-Co-OpOfficial


danyool777 responds:

Thanks man.
Ill try to calm a little bit with the sfx during melody sections to give it a little more boost.
I do need a little bit more variation also haha.
Thanks for the help :D


Dude, really? I can tell you worked hard on this! It's soft and brilliant, i'm really loving it. I think that squealing UFO noise FX can be left out after about 1:14. I really like the beat, at first it took some time to adjust to it, but the more I listened, the more I loved it. After 2:25, this song is freakin gorgeous. Some chord variation here and there wouldn't hurt, also. The breaks are just right, too. Overall nice job, I'm really enjoying this.


danyool777 responds:

:D
There needs to be more people like you reviewing on the audio portal lol.
You were right about the Squeal I used haha, I took it out and it sounds better.
Im not very good at chord variation though, it isnt my strong suit.
Thanks for reviewing, it really helps me progress.

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danyool777
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Score
4.35 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 30, 2014
4:09 PM EST
Genre
Drum N Bass
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12.1 MB
5 min 17 sec
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