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SLW Ft. DJDj & Fats- Dayjam

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Just a collab between SinZLazTWordZ, DJDj, and Fats. Sounds pretty cool, to me.

Enjoy- DJDj

Verse 1- DJDj
Verse 2- Fats
Beat- SinZLazTWordZ

[DJDj's Lyrics]

Sometimes, I think it just cant be done
I think the strength of will it takes
Will get me straight overrun

I said,

Sometimes, I feel like I dont bring enough
to the table of my peers
who got it even more rough, than I did

and even though its in the back of my head
That I'mma never get it right
And that I'm just gon end up dead

I'mma keep a constant rythm
I'mma keep a steady pace
Cuz aint nothin got the will
To take me outta this race

Hoppin on the beat
every chance I get
Shiftin in my seat
Tryna forget
So hard
T-Tryna figure the words
W-With a stutter and a sigh
I'm breakin out of this world

[Fats' Lyrics]

Sometimes I wonder if I ever even counted in
The bars that resonate are wasted spit up with that smell o' gin
The pace I bring
Is safe again
What if I got a cage to bring?
Lockin' up my mind and heart so I can guarantee a win
I ain't had that many
But the ones are get are pretty big
Breathin' comin' hollow
My veins are splayed like cablin'
Invadin' what is left of all the notion of what hatred is
You never knew or wondered until I was done with chasin' it.


Awesome song with amazing lyrics and beats. Unfortunatly though it had to end so soon.


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Alright, alright! I'm feeling this. Pretty original, I like where this is going, but I would LOVE for it to be longer. Maybe a catchy synth melody here and there, a stronger beat, but the lyrics are spot on and I love them. This really has something going with it, nice work!

NeoAlchemist247 responds:

Thanks a lot! I have a few other tracks in the works, but I could definitely dig making this track longer if it sounds good.


Amazing lyrics guys. That was pretty sick, not gonna lie.

Props to both of you on the lyrics and it made my day to see someone spit some real lyrics to one of my instrumentals.

Get at me and we can collab on some more, get at me with some ideas and il see what I can come up with.

Thanks again man
downloaded and fav

You can call me Tech

NeoAlchemist247 responds:

Nice to meet ya, Tech. Props for the sick beat, dude. I was havin problems finding one that sounded good yesterday, and this one really stood out. I don't really have many ideas for beats, I just sort of use them when they inspire me. Just keep tryna do better each time, and keep tryna be original, and I'm sure I'll end up usin your beats again.


Sounds pretty cool to me also! I can definitely tell you're using a better mic; sounds damn good for a day jam! Hell yeah dude, dope verse as well!

I like Fats' bars too, it seems like he put a bit more emotion into it; possibly experimenting with his voice a bit more. Either way, great work all around, and a slick beat choice. Great work gentlemen,

NeoAlchemist247 responds:

Lol thanks, bruh. I'm just tryin different stuff, seein where it goes, yknow. I was really impressed with Fats' verse. Sorta like when you fire a .12 gauge shotgun for the first time. You're just like "Awh, man. This isn't gonna be all that impressive. Just a loud noise, some minor damage, and then its over." Then BAM. Floored. lol.


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Credits & Info

4.31 / 5.00

Jan 28, 2014
10:16 PM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
2.1 MB
1 min 33 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.