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This starts out with so much potential, but imo what it really needed was some fillers in the background, the whole song just sounded... empty. You need percussion through more of the song and not just on the beat. It wasnt long enough to get redundent, it wasnt long enough period again imo.
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the synth that you used was a little bit annoying. Maybe you should use different types of Crashes. the percussion was alright. The plucked instrument was not bad :D
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Thanks for your advice!