Phat 5'd ill be checkin your portal lol
Wow that's some awesome sounds cool vocals too! you got my 5 good sir!! ^^
You have some really professional sounds here -- did you make them from scratch or are they from a sample pack?
There are good ideas here, but there needs to be more energy/contrast. Your B section (around 1:04) is good, but the stuff before it is too similar in frequency range and energy. The sub bass also seems to be doing its own thing sometimes, when it should really be following the bassline.
I hope some of this helps you improve, good work.
Yes I did make these all myself, from scratch using NI massive and some EQ automation.
The sub actually follows all of the notes in the drop, only during the break down and what is considered a verse the sub is from the first section of the drop, just to help with building to it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.