Nice track! I like the instrumentation and overall quality of it. I do have some critisisms though. Firstly, I would have liked to hear more percussion on the track, specifically cymbals, hihats, rides, maybe even acoustic percussion. I also feel like the mastering was pushed just a little too hard, sounding overly compressed. That said, I thought the Act 2 remix was phenominal, but again, more percussive work would have completely enhanced the track. You should work on that more hehe. Overall, nice job, 4.5 stars. ;)
The lack of percussion is deliberate - the original only had simple percussion similar to this; I agree that I probably should've fixed that for the Act 2 part.
The over-compression was also deliberate, this time as part of me trying out new things; I'm still working on where to draw that line (I used to undershoot a lot, hence my beefing it up a bit here).
Thanks for the feedback!