Honestly, I like this better than the Third.
For a variety of reasons I like this one better than the third track, now don't think I'm ragging on you when I offer criticism, it's all meant to be constructive. It flows better, much easier to zone out to, and to dance to, frankly, in my opinion.
You, I believe, did use the same bass sample as you did in the third track, but in this one, it's acceptable because of the wavy effect it creates. Works much better with the effect one desires a trance song to create.
My one and only gripe with this one.
Otherwise, keep up the great work.
Pullin up in a black caddilac!
Who is that!!??
ITS MICHEAL JACK!!!!!!!
H a H a H a lol guess who i saw... rick james bitch!!
AHHH YE THIS IS FRESH
DAMM DUDE THIS IS PIMP FUCKIN RAY DAY IT IS AS FRESH AS THE TIM HORTENS MUFFIN I HAD THIS MORNIN NICE DUDE KEEP IT UP
Ha Ha your a fuckin crazy ass retard man.
Its really not nice to listen to a demo version of a song... then to me, I think that the musician didn't try if all he did was submit a demo. Try to keep song lengths to 1 minute to 2 minutes, and pour all your talent into them! Then we KNOW you tried your hardest =)
The song is good, nice progression, but the drums are to simple. Sure, its nice for the beignning, but the hard dignified simplicity doesn't really work out. Make some 909 ride samples go, some open hi hat samples, shakers, anything percussion, make it colourful! It would make the song very enjoyable.
Other than that, you have a pretty darn good piece of trance right here. I could see me hitting the dance floor to this =D
Keep it up! Could you stop by my audio page and check out my music, and leave a review or two? I'd appreciate it if you did =D
Yeah i jsut dont really have time to make a full song but when i get the full full verson on my music making program i will do my best to make a great trance or techno song...
Thx for review great advice you gave and ill look in to makeing full versons for my demo's
And sure man ill check out your music if you want me 2 and ill leave a review or 2 lol..