Very nice beginning
But the delay you had on it made it collide with itself. The sounds distort, because you made the synth delay ontop of itself. Not really a pretty sound =(
Very nice of backround noises later in the song though, they world very nice. I would have liked something to tell the listener that the drums are coming up, like a drum break in or something, but it was still good and smooth.
Good work! I enjoyed this piece of electronica =D Could you check out my songs and leave a review or two? I'd really appreciate it if you did =D
Thanks for the feedback, dude! As always, it is appreciated. The delay was meant to collide with itself, because thats the way I wanted it. But to each their own, right? :) I'll check out your stuff for sure.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.