Great job with this one. Is this your third song ever on a DAW? Sounds like you already have some theory knowledge. That's good. I would look more into the drums, though. They sound very muddy and lackluster compared to the piano and oscs. Nothing much else to say. Pretty soon, people will be asking you for help with FL.
I was in band for three years about 6-7 years ago if that means anything. I would always try to constantly analyze songs in my head and try to think of my own beats. I wasn't even familiar with the term "music theory" until a little bit ago lol. Still not exactly sure what that is... I did used to make a little bit of music on a game called "LittleBigPlanet" (a game where you make levels for the community to play) but the sequencer is much, MUCH more simple than FL. Thanks for the feedback. Drums are definitely what I have the most trouble with =P
I'm not much of a trance fan. But I can appreciate the effort and the skill that skill that comes with it. Understanding the mechanics of music isn't easy. So damn good job, especially for just starting out.
Well, you already have a better melodic sense than me, and for only being your third song this is really impressive! You have a good ear for picking out sounds that go well together!
You're doing better than me when I first started, which was only a year ago. So keep it up.
You've earned a fan, hopefully I could earn one as well.
Not bad, its slow then builds up and then drops again, its not bad at all for a third song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.