The melody is awesome and the song structure is great! Really good choice of sounds as well! I think the drum samples could have used a little more punch but they blend with the other instruments in a softer way here and that's not a bad thing. I do think that 6 minutes is a bit long for a song like this but you did have plenty of good progression so it wasn't like I was dragging my feet by the end of it. I think you could tighten it up a bit and add a crazy breakdown or something and have it at 3:30 -4:30 in length. Just a suggestion though, it wasn't really a big negative or anything. Good work!
I'm not sure what VST you had available but everything sounded great except the percussion. The melody is invoking nostalgia and is certainly making me bias to how much I enjoy this piece. It does get a little repetitive as well. Like I tell many composers, modulate! Awesome work though.
Thanks for the feedback! Most of the sounds I either made on Sytrus or 3xOsc (most from following tutorials.) Do you have any good free percussion VST suggestions? Well i'm sure I could have gotten better stuff with some of the default presets, I probably just didn't look hard enough.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.