Hmm. This really isn't my style but you're a dope emcee so I'll try my best to remove any bias I might have.
Listening to this/reading through the lyrics I didn't really run into anything that really jarred me. That's not to say that I think that your message is insincere, but I've heard a lot of stuff very similar to this - in fact, I originally thought the hook was a sample. You bring a lot of energy to the mic which is a little unusual given the subject matter, there's also a bit of an offset between your style and the hook, and by the time it plays the third time around I feel like it's lost a bit of its power rather than having gained more.
That being said, you have a really tight flow and the lyrics are really consistent and each word seems to 'belong' where you put it.
emotional man. can feel it in the lyrics. Great beat choice. Awesome delivery. 10/10
This song deserves so much more, Its this song with meaning feelings and much more that makes me want to be in music, I wish i could record like that...Im jealous like not even joking, You have the voice and the flow, You have it all you need to be seen!
good shit bro.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.