I really like the beat and the lyrics were really entertaining. I'd work on your voice, though, so you sound more confident and strong. For some of the song I felt like you were whispering, like you didn't want everyone to hear it. Get louder, brother!
It's funny that you say that, because my roommate said the same thing. I was actually trying to make fun of how so many modern rappers whisper really lazily in the recording studio. I suppose it wasn't obvious enough, so it comes across as me being lazy. Maybe I'm being too satirical. haha
Thanks for the feedback! It's always seriously appreciated.