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Produced by Namir Hassan & Kevin McMahon.


Well, I've just listen to all four tunes you've currently got on here. I haven't reviewed them all, just this one.

I've noticed a bit of a theme through the tunes you've currently got here, they're all pretty good and they all plod along, of all the songs you currently have here, this one feels the most disjointed, there are elements in this song that I don't feel work together.

you have this really long build up followed by a huge change in the overall vibe of the song
at around 1:07 is where the change kicks in and I just don't think it fits in with the rest of what's here.

All of your tunes could do with some more variation. If you're having huge build ups they need to be worth while, the change that follows them needs to change dramatically to give the most satisfaction from when the build up ends and you enter the new part to the song, the pay off for a good build up and subsequent change, you'll feel it and you'll learn to know when and where it works better, but keep working at it, don't be afraid to try different things.

Overall you have some good melodies, your beats and percussion could do with a little more variation. Try to use different kicks, snares, etc... for each tune you produce, you'll benefit from the experience of working with different sounds, which will have a knock on effect to the overall piece and it's dynamics. and help encourage you to create different sounding tracks.

I wish you well on your musical journey and I will peer in to your music page from time to time to see how your progressing.

Don't forget to pay the forums a visit and aquaint yourself with the regulars there.

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namirhassan responds:

I appreciate your insightful review. :D

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1.67 / 5.00

Jan 15, 2014
8:21 PM EST
File Info
3.5 MB
1 min 32 sec

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