You have a very original idea going on here, and you know, it actually turned out alright! =D
It would be awesome if you had it break into a vocoder at the end, and then have awesome drums and a bass break in. That would be feckin' sweet...
Awesome work, seriously. Do more of this xD Could you drop by my audio page and leave a review or two? I'd appreciate it if you did =D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.