That beginning.. Boring. Sounds a bit flat. Needs more variety.. More instruments. There's like, no instruments! 1:24 is boring. Same as beginning for all I care. This song is so samey. Eh.
It's actually a really good track. It has it's faults though. First of all, I think the overall production quality is pretty low. The instruments are very very basic except for that supersaw-ish synth u use at like 1:50 and other times. The kick and clap are standard fl studio kicks and claps, which I personally dislike (even though I use them sometimes as well XP.)
The main leads at the beginning sounds very flat and boring in my opinion. The bass is very weak and it's pretty flat sounding with no real presence as well. The transistions could have been a lot better. when you change from one song to another you should try making a buildup, and then drop it into the next section, especially since you use a supersaw synth at times.
The track is also very samey. I can hear that you mixed up the melody sometimes, but there's no dynamics whatsoever so it still ends up sounding the same. After 1 minutes I felt like I had heart it already.
The drum patter itself could also have been more varied.
Anyway, that was for all the bad parts. there are good stuff as wel :).
First of all, I luved the melodies :D (luv = love x 10) I really liked how you change the melody at times, and with more dynamics it would sound awesome :D. The mixing is pretty good actually. I don't hear any frequencies clashing at all. I liked the basic arrangement for this track as well.
Really liked the jumpy feel of the track overall.
I think this really could become a great track if you just work a bit more on it. I hope I wasn't sounding to negative in this review :/- I just try to write as many of my opinions as I can of the track in my review to help the artist get better.
Keep up the good work :D. Some really great ideas in this one ;)
(Ps. I actually liked how you used a bassguitar instead of a basssynth in this one :D)
pretty good yo ! :) i like it
WOW SUCH A MUSIC MUCH POWER WOW
This is a great audio
keep it up
i like it
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