[0:55] Use it as a loop. It would probably be good as menu music in an RPG.
Agreed
Kinda torturous. No offense, but have you been told that your tone deaf? Many people are, so don't take it as an insult.
Here's some less vague constructive criticism. The strings are jumbled, and there really isn't a key. The beat is off, and the cymbals don't help either.
Boring.
I liked how your tried to use various instruments but overall, this was boring and the instruments sounded very fake. Usually, menu music has some nice beat to it or a catchy tune, this had none of them. Nice effort though.
well....
It sounds like the same thing over and over again. The strings are to jumbled up, the harmony never changes, the cymbals get extremely predictable and annoying.
It's a loop, what do you want?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Professor-Doom 
