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Jan 6, 2014 | 4:33 PM EST
File Info
1.3 MB
1 min 26 sec
4.00 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 4.00 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Hello ng! I'm relatively new here and after some time, here is my first submission. I've been doing alot of 'firsts' lately and one of which was tinkering with music composition applications. I made this on Music Studio 2 which is a mobile application for ipad. I actually made this particular track quite a while ago and held off on submitting because it's not all that great, but then maybe I should be proud that it's as good as it is being literally my first ever complete soundtrack.

What you are currently listening to is the result of a little tinkering really, I came up with a little melody and just added stuff in, I was pleased with how the drums turned out and how I ended the song but otherwise, I realise it is nothing but a melody. I've criticized this piece of work already and I realize it's almost hypocritical to submit something like this based on the feedback I've provided on other submissions in the audio portal. Though I've torn this one apart, I'm still happy to hear any outside opinions whether they are good/bad/otherwise.

I plan to look into getting myself the demo version of FL Studio so as to broaden my abilities and skills through experimentation. Also if there is a rule such that a piece must live up to a particular standard or whatever lemme know in a pm or review. Any other general tips for a newbie are appreciated. ^_^ Such as "What genre do I put this in?"

Also you guys can use this however you want if you want! Just give me credit and a link so I can see my works in action :)



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty cool idea too it. It feels (to me) like a tribal nightmare song.. Maybe there's a clan of Indians that are being attacked by a swarm of demons :D

You've got potential, man. Keep it up and don't take harmful reviews seriously :)

toby128 responds:

Yeah it does kinda have that evil underlying feel to it. :) With a bunch of tweaking I decided that'd be the best way to go.
The beat I came up with turned out pretty good but then the piece became dependent on a primary beat and the introduction of instruments. I intend to do more messing around to figure out how to transition from a more dominant beat to secondaries to not only increase variety but to extend the duration of the song as well. If you have any resources that you used to learn to make music it'd be immensely appreciated if you could point me in a good direction. (pm) ^_^

Thanks for the review and the advice! :)