Interesting sounds mate, I like the intro, quite quirky. Not a fan of that cymbal hit at around 0.25 secs, sounds too loud and too harsh for my liking. The high pitched mallets are cool but not overly fond of that lead melody, again is a bit harsh and in your face.
I understand what you mean. I'm trying to find ways to make a simple and subtle beat or melody. Seeing as how nobody wants to have their ears assaulted by multiple sounds. So what I can conclude is that the lead melody needs to have a less volume so that it's not blaring. Thanks for the good criticism my friend!