this could be great if like pixel said you picked different synthgs. also, the two that you're trying to mold together in the beginning are off time and it dooesn't sound too good. just change the notes up a little bit. and like the others, you need to make the percussion more powerful. start messing with the effects panel. layer your kick with overdrive, parametric eq, and even a distortion with the levels turned down just to get more bang but not so much distortion.
I liked the intro but you need a new synthesizer. It sounds cluttered, and like Envy your songs are sounding the same. I liked the sound effects, also i could hardly even hear the drums over all the other sounds.
Aww, I just got compared to my idol :D! No, seriously haha. I really do need a new lead synth; as much as I like the one I use it's the same sound as my lead every time and every song is almost the same excepting a new melody. Thanks for the review, I'll be sure to go review your new track in a little bit!
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