Not so much for trance, but...
The intro was pretty heavy, up until the drums kicked in. I personally prefer the heavier kind of kick drum. Something that flows with the mix, yet stands out like a tree on an open field. Think of it like an iceberg; A small tip that peaks out of the ocean, with a gargantuan base that could sink ships if they were to sail into it. In a non-marsian language that basically means "more bass, and a small amount of high". I'm not so great at mixing terminology, but you might get it.
The lead synth that pops in from time to time is kind of out of place. Not melodically, but in the mix (I think you see what the main problem is with the song as a whole).
I dig the organ. It gives a nice touch to the verse.
Overall, this song is a little to repetetive for me, and the mixing could definitely be better, which I'm sure that you could handle with some patience and a pinch of devotion and skill.
Keep it up, man!