Pretty Good

not bad again

you should have a listen to some primal scream or beta band it has a similar tone to that sort of stuff. The synth that switches to eother channel is nauseating, slow it down and let it flow between the channels. i like the beat tho, the guitar is really crisp and the chorus delay underneath is really nice to. theres another guitar underneath which is too quiet and panning again, place it to the extrememe of either channel and bring it up in level and it'd help.

again a lil bit of reverb to give the track some glue and some mastering would help.

again 4/5

pitbulljones (indie section)