Your delivery and flow doesn't sound strong enough to me. I also found it hard to understand you sometimes, so advice I'd give for that is to enunciate more. Lyrics were okay, but they can be improved. Overall, great track and I think Clabtrap is going to get interesting now.
This completes volume one of Fuck Teqneek. Look for it on Bandcamp soon. For free obviously.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.