Quite nice. Maybe the production quality could be better - i think you needed better vsts. But overall i think that this is a quite well produced ans structured piece. I liked your pizzicato intro. Also the concept after which you wanted to use the drums and synths was well thought.
I really think you should get a better gear - maybe some collection like komplete or something to get a better quality. That would improve your stuff really a lot. Also i would surrogate the synths with strings. It would have been cool if you could bring in more contrast contrast to the high playing instruments (Maybe a cimbasso or deep synth). Overall some really nice ideas and interesting passages. Keep it up!
Voted 5. Merry Christmas!