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No!!!!!! (Siney's gift)

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Dont we all just love being heartbroken?
This song is about a guy who is terribly in love and he is approaching the object of his affection throughout the first half of the song, he describes how he feels and asks her to marry him.
She says no.
The second half is about the despair, confusion, shock, and everything else that comes with being rejected by those you love.

Siney asked an atonal pop tune...so...while pop is about predictable chords and organized sounds, something atonal is the complete opposite, it is everything but predictable and organized.
So i made a pop song that turns into an atonal nightmare, it was a troll request but i had a freaking blast anyway xD
I hope this fills your "atonal pop" needs.

Merry Christmas Siney!!
Merry Christmas Everyone!!

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Those drums at the beginning caught me. They sounded just amazing. <3
Then the other parts kick in, and I listen to your words -- it takes a little bit of listening to, but I'm able to figure it out. It seems a bit faded in, so a little bit more clarity is appreciated. I got the vibe of a studio jam session/small live performance from up to 1:18. That cymbal roll at 1:18 is divine, by the way.

Then when the big NO kicks in at 1:19 and all the atonal pop starts, I can tell you had fun twiddling around with this, that and the other. That guitar sounded like it was in the hands of a budding Jimi Hendrix. I am DEAD SERIOUS. Everything sounded nightmarish, but the occasional 'no' bits made it sound less of a nightmare than it felt it could be. Then again, there's a very thin line between having an atonal pop section, and outright turning it into some rock or metal smashfest. XD

I quite like what you've done in general -- I've been nitpicking here and there, but you've still made nothing less than an enjoyable track.

4.5/5.

DivoFST responds:

Yeah unfortunately i am still struggling quite a bit to properly mix my voice to make it as clear as possible....both my mic and my voice have a lot of low end so it gets really hard to find that sweet clear spot :(
Maybe a bad choice on my part to include the ongoing NO!, i wanted to maintain a remainder why the song had turned into something "horrible" and at the same time keep the connection to the first section.
"That guitar sounded like it was in the hands of a budding Jimi Hendrix" *.*
Unfortunately it was in the hands of a Divo :( xD
Thanks a lot for the detailed review Trois and good luck in your future!! :D
Cheers!!

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Dec 25, 2013
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2 min 10 sec

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