Hey there,

first i think you should put this track into the cinematic genre. The combination of the percussion and the unison string section worked quite well.

There were a few things which could be improved in my opinion:
* You should insert some dominant synths and the rest should be accompanyment. Maybe french horns would be suitable.

* Also i would recommend to bring in a midpart where the key signature changes - also a change in speed in the drums would have been good i think. The midpart normally should come after your ending here. I would insert it with some brass action or some raising dissonant string noises and then: Boooooom! There the action comes!

* use the full dynamical specrte. The volume always is constant in this track. Some changings here can intensify the feel a lot!

* bring in deeper and massive percussion action! Something like the stormdrum 2 stuff, heavyocity evolved series or damage. That will add the special epic kick to the track.

Overall well done. Hope this helped a little bit :D

Merry christmas and a happy new year!

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