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w00ki3-I want to believe

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It's my second classical and it's a simply melody and short ;)

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Ten utwór od dzis zdecydowanie nalezy do moich ulubionych - ma wyjatkowo delikatne i piekne brzmienie ^u^

W00ki3 responds:

Dzięki wielkie ;) niedługo wrzucę kawałek z Hobbita ;) ostatniej części ;) nagrałem z siostrą :) myślę że też może ci się spodobać ;) a i właśnie mam jeszcze kawałki które też mogą ci się spodobać ;) w00ki3-Remind me; w00ki3-Babys'time ;) a co do twoich rysunków to po prostu nie mam słów... Ta kreska *.* i przekaz są cudowne. Nie mogę uwierzyć że to wszystko w programie robisz *.* ;) trzymaj tak dalej

Hey there, i have seen you wanted this reviewed, so here is my opinion:

I like simple structured and minimalistic stuff, because you can exactly see any details of a piece. The instrumentation and the harmonic concept work well. Also the tempo fits to the piece. I just think you could boost your music to a very higher level if you would try this:

* use the full dynamical range of the instruments. Bring in some crescendi in, maybe some rhythmical stuff / syncopes. They would make the whole sound more versatile.

* build your tracks up after a certain concept. Maybe A - B - A. The first A = from the beginning to the midpart. B = midpart. Its always helpful to bring in something new here to make the piece more interesting. The second A = repetition of the theme with some variation and some fade out.

* If you use strings as accompaniment, try not to use them as "synth-pads". Real strings always have some movement going on, so you should let the single string ensemble instruments go their own ways. Its not as complicated as it seems. Just try a little bit - its worth it. Normally you have got Violins 1st, 2nd, Violas and the celli. Ust the celli to get in a nice bass - feeling and let the other strings just play melodies and such.

* another point which i noticed is that you always seem to have the same loudness / velocity level. Be versatile even in this way.

I hope you like constructive criticism. In my opinion thats the only thing which really helps to improve someones music. Your feeling for harmonic progression is good. So if you try out some of the stuff i have told you above, you will make a huge step forward.

If you always needed some help or just my opinion - let me know. All the best and merry christmas to you!

Chris

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W00ki3 responds:

Thanks a lot for ur opinion! I'll take it to my heart and try to do somthing with ur advice ;)

I love the melody and instruments. It is pretty simple, and I wish there was a little more dynamic contrast, but it's still a cool and cute little piece. I love how the strings get a little solo of their own at 1:04. The progression and structure is pretty interesting. The ending caught me off guard a bit, though. It might help if you have the second-to-last chord lead into the last one rather than have a pause in between. Anyway, overall good job. Keep at it man! ;D

W00ki3 responds:

I'm really glad to read that ;) Thanks a lot ;) I'll do my best and try to compose a better one with perfectly technic ;)

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W00ki3
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Dec 24, 2013
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1 min 39 sec
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