Very good indeed.
This was definitely well done. You can easily picture a peaceful scene of a waterfall "and a rainbow flowing out of it."(eh, its corny, but I like it)
And to Yettan. That single phrase " 'Memory' from Andrew Lloyd Webber's Cats..."
drives me insane. I'm sorry, but I heard that WAY too much in the movie "Jersey Girl" Anyways....
My hats off to you good sir.
The first part of the melody sounds almost identical to "Memory" from Andrew Lloyd Webber's Cats...
This is very good, you definately captured the atmosphere you were seeking to
Funny, you're not the first person to say that...
You could sense a bit a sorrow every now and then, one could assume that this world was made out of resentment or avoidance for the pain of what really happened.
Very soft and not over the top one bit, every instrument served a specific purpose and that's good mastery.
There's not much criticism other then the amount of instruments you let into the song at once, it created a sort of monotonous behavior among what you wanted to execute.
pretty harp and pretty flute - sounds like fl..
this is a BEAUTIFUL song - im very much impressed - there is absolutely NOTHING wrong about it - and well,.. thats rare hehe..
Nope, it's still Garage Band, haha!!
This is such a beautiful song. The first half of the melody reminds me of something i heard before... oh well.
I have to say that i really love the harp and the flute in this piece. Maybe add some little bird sound fx, but very low volume, soft little bird noises lol.
The only thing i would have changed is the ending. I would remove the little silence part before the final notes and have it chained with the rest of the song.
All in all it's and awesome piece and i wish you the best of luck for this month's contest :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.