Definatly get 10 for originality on this one o.0, anyways, for your first submission its good.
At first your melody had these strange delayed notes that really through me off but you fixed that as the song went on. Theme kind of reminded me of Zelda: Ocarina of Time at points, which is a plus since i love that game, that probably wasnt intentional though (which is also good). the song was empty at places which isnt good.
The melody got really repetetive even though this song is short, but that is ussually how it is with first submissions, from what i've seen. I liked it the most at the end with the duel synths but the ending was... well strange...
Lastly just wanted to add that this sounds nothing like a techno to me (imo every techno needs a big bass kick pounding), but i guess music genre's are decided different by every listener.
Keep at it.
are you using hyperscore for your music?
the beat was ok..
good beat. but the melody was kind of weird =( nice choir you used. Put some chords in it too. It gets annoying after a while becuase it keeps on repeating its self. :/
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