Hey man, you don't HAVE to upload every single track you make. If a certain track is being a pain in the ass, just put it off and work on it at a later date. And when I mean a later date, I mean whenever you feel like working on it. Don't force yourself.
- this track is more breakbeat than DnB...but they're more or less related so ignore this asdfasdfadf
- It's really soothing. And nice melodies, too. Sounds like something from The Sims 3.
- Try glitching that beat a bit more like you did earlier in the track. Don't over do it, though. Or you could try varying the beats slightly near the end (like removing the hats or kick).
- Give a few seconds worth of silence to let that last note ring a bit.
Wow, your review is surprisingly helpful. Like holy crap this is some constructive criticism right there man, damn.
As for the track itself, I really just couldn't work it out. I tried a million different melodies and instruments, and I just didn't get what I wanted to make. I still like the song, it's just a complete different song than what I wanted it to be.
As for your advice, I will certainly put that to good use. I'm glad someone can still see some points to improve, rather than just rage over it like me.
So yeah. Thanks man. You helped me out here. Glad you found it soothing (since I was kinda going for that) :D