Cool & soothing man. I really can't think of how to give much helpful feedback on this as it's a song thats out of my kinda zone, i'll say this though, I'd have a look at the kick though it feels kind of gentle should i say in some parts (You can hear it but it doesn't really drive through the song if you get me) perhaps maybe look into boosting transients in the kick to give it more of a snap.
Thing is though although i've said this maybe this song is one for gentle drums kinda like something of the Daft Punk - R.A.M album if you know what i mean.
Good work though man has emotion in it which is what really defines a song most the time anyway!
Sorry i couldn't really be of much help here.
I like that you are showing your originality. I'd suggest tampering/creating your own sounds more to really make your personality come through!
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