Enchanting song, sir! I can understand how one could come become emotionally overwhelmed when faced with lyrics like those: that is true poetry, brimming with depth.
I was on the verge of one of those musical tingles (or 'frisson', if you want to sound fancy) on the verse starting "The spectrum in your eyes..."
The way you sing in that verse and the vocal layering sounds quite reminiscent of Phil Collins. That is a very good thing.
I think the problem of background noise and such (probably more noticeable on the last verse) has already been addressed. Other than that...can't deny that this has lots of feeling, and I'm sure Back-From-Purgatory must have been very touched.
Keep it up, Real!
5 / 5